Commented on the poem "Broken" on 02/01/09 at 12:54 AM
omg i love this. man you have a real gift and u should really put it out there for every one to read,listen and talk about thing you say are real and i enjoyed this poem is just one i can take to......very deep
Commented on the poem "I miss you." on 01/22/09 at 11:31 PM
there is always someone you miss and you wish you can have them back in your life but you know thats not going to happen turst i've been there and every night i have to go to bed thinking about it. its like they are there but you know they are not. thats the real part that hurt the most i wish i could change what happen that night but i can't now they are gone and i stuck with it damn some things just hurt....:-(
Commented on the poem "See thru my eyes" on 01/22/09 at 11:28 PM
i like that words reach out to me i feel the same at time but i just smile and move on cause tell you the truth no one really care i give u a 10
lol that is true but some still cheat even if you fuck every day. if thats the case then hell she can have him but good write i like reading what a man thinks about things and that one got me.
Commented on the poem "Mr. Mime" on 06/16/08 at 12:31 AM
this is really a wonderful write comeing from a freestyle