Commented on the poem "Crushed Velvet" on 06/07/08 at 09:47 AM
Harrowing. I kind of feel I'd be doing an injustice by looking at it from simply a poetic perspective as it transcends that border; but it was written .. beautragically .. I guess you would call it? >_
Commented on the poem "Fire Flies" on 06/07/08 at 09:02 AM
"Tears escape me like the body heat that once kept you comfortable" - that one struck a nerve, but I think the second stanza as a whole does that lol. Closed very eloquently, too.
Turns out 'wizdom' was a pretty apt name, huh? haha. Through and through, all well said - everyone needs a memo like this at some point, too bad most don't get it. Highly enjoyed write.
After watching that video I couldn't imagine a piece able to parallel Gemineye's display - but I'd be a liar if I said your version wasn't hanging right there with his. Decisive flow and momentous as a whole, very admirable.
Commented on the poem "Love's Suicide" on 01/31/08 at 11:48 PM
I've always found Haiku's problematic in trying to get my point across; but you did so very clearly - and deeply here. Nice!
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Commented on the poem "Crushed Velvet" on 06/07/08 at 09:47 AM
