I'm feeling this it's like a lecture that a lot of people really need when they slacking on what they doing, you really let yourself be heard on this, keep writing and I'ma keep reading! I'ma peep your other now
This was purdy cool I'm feeling the way you put down your feelings, kinda threw me off with the style of writing, but that's you, keep doing you! some nice work I'ma peep some more! keep writing! peace!
Commented on the poem "BEHIND A SMILE" on 11/20/09 at 07:17 PM
I'm feeling this, there's alot you can't tell about a person just by smiles, that's how I am to tell you the truth, I smile a lot, and try to keep a lot of things hidden, I'm saving it for my projects, but then you get criticized for NOT showing that side...this came out nice tho! another nice piece of work! keep writing!
Commented on the poem "SOMEONE TO LOVE" on 11/20/09 at 07:09 PM
I'm feeling this, some people are really looking for someone that's not controlling, then again what is control except asking a question...in itself it's a very confusing thing I think of, either way keep writing I liked this whole thing, really shows a person what they lookin' for in life
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