Commented on the poem "Boss Lady" on 11/04/09 at 11:19 AM
nice flow, i like when u write about ur pain, but the flow is on point again.
Commented on the poem "Bizarre Love" on 11/04/09 at 11:16 AM
I read one of ur older poems and i can see the evolution of ur writing, Ur flow was flawless on this, sick.. u r getting better as a poet. U really got ur message across yet u kept the flow going. I love how open u r in ur writing, it makes people relate better. U have a gift
Commented on the poem "Poetry In Motion" on 11/04/09 at 11:07 AM
there is nothing more sexy then a confident woman.... u seep of sexy n confidence on this write. Nice flow too, i can only imagine what ur voice would sound like on track. :)
first thing that this poem tells me is that u are emotional, i think that when u hate some one u go hard, but thats only cause u love just as hard. i really like this poem, it's like a window into ur soul. u opened open on this fav!
Commented on the poem "Cater 2 U" on 11/02/09 at 03:42 PM
ok i'm a stop fucking with ur poems cause u r dangerous. This is the most under-rated poem on this site. this was sweet, i felt ur honesty on this.. i really felt like u would do everything u said u would do in this poem. Somebody better wife u up QUICK!!!!!