haha Well, Pardon My Swag; But I'm Feel'n This. I Couldn't Help But Bust A Laugh Out As I Continued To Read. Yes, Indeed Our Game Aint As Bad-Ass As We Think. This Write Reminds Me Of My Best Guy-Friend Devin.
Nice. I Feel The Fella'. I Too Can't Stand The Fakers And The So Called "Gangstas" That Wouldn't Bust A Grape In A Fruit Fight But Swear They So Hard. Real Recognizes Real, And As Kind As I Am, I Wouldn't Recommend Anyone Take It For Weakness, Cause That'll Be Just Another Example Of The Cause & Effect Or Real Going Toe-To-Toe With Fake.
But HE dont kno
He just poppin off
HE just a stranger
He dont kno about my anger
Right now this Man life in DANGER
That Part Stood Out To Me. People Never Know Who They're Messin' With Until They Come Across The One Person Who's Had So Much Stress, Anger, And Emotions Build Up; A Person That's Just Ready To Release All Of That Build Up On Someone.
That Was Some Floetry Right There :-D
iReally Liked It A Lot, iWas Into The Whole Beginning, Especially The Part "I smoke my cigs with style
But I don’t get the cancer
I’m the cancer of the establishment
A girl I know lights my fire " That Stuck Out To Me, Maybe Because It's What Grabbed My Attention And Made Me Wanna Read On. Very Nice Jay :-D
iLOVED This Poem. iEnjoyed Read'n It Too, Cause It's So True, It's Always The Drop-Dead Gorgeous Ones Yue Gotta Look Out For. Some Way, Some How, They'll Do Yue Derrty Everytime.. iCan't Wait For The Day iFind Someone Who's Handsome-ness Is Only Skin Deep :-)
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Commented on the poem "Your Swag...Ha Ha Ha" on 08/30/09 at 07:19 PM
