Commented on the poem "Nectar of My Pen" on 11/16/09 at 08:17 PM
i love your word play...you a
take simple things to the next level...you could have just pulled a weezy and said your the "best poet alive".....lol... but u made it sound even better....and innocent. great write..much love peace... :)
Commented on the poem "Chocolate" on 11/16/09 at 08:15 PM
lol..wat an addiction..lol...(guilty)..im eating some right now....its no good for me
i wold have slaped yor ass is you said some shit like "Excuse me lady but,
I will fuck you like you never been fucked before, love you
Like you never been loved before. Fuck wit me " lol..thats wat a REAL WOMAN ould do...lol....horrific story..lol..loved it..god bless...peace.. ♥ yQ
Commented on the poem "He wasn't...." on 11/15/09 at 11:15 AM
love it mami!!!! i got a couple of those he wasn't but some how some way... i fell for them...spoke the words right out of my mind. fantastic write..much love..god bless...peace
Commented on the poem "lock the door..." on 11/15/09 at 11:12 AM
men and thier locks...sometimes i forget yall get hurt too.
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Commented on the poem "Nectar of My Pen" on 11/16/09 at 08:17 PM
