Commented on the poem "IS IT.........." on 11/06/09 at 12:00 PM
A whirlwind... a bunch of thought on the same path. Thass what this feels like to me. I understand the peace and i think most people have been in this residence this stae of confusion ya digg. keep spreadin your words around poet
Stay blessed
Commented on the poem "Untitled10." on 11/01/09 at 05:02 PM
I will admit until the third line I wasnt sure If it was an elusive sex sonnet you know the one misdierction... But as for the peace actually it was real groovy. I dugg how you switched gears here ~~> I prefer hurricane, unheard destruction Significance of the small meanings buried within the reaching heart and the final line of So thankful to learn the truth in what the surface may not address or even posess
Stay blessed poet
Commented on the poem "Matilda" on 11/01/09 at 04:26 PM
I click on the peace because of the Title but Champ said you can pull different meaning from each read. I enjoyed the off beat style of it It makes you look for a meaning and push your own pen to find it ya digg
Stay blessed poet
Commented on the poem "I'm Over It...." on 11/01/09 at 04:10 PM
You know what... its like we were thinking the same vibe but you finished the peace.. i was listenin to an old Pac track about 'bad mothers' and came up with this but couldnt do anything with it' Now I lay me ,down to sleep I pray the Lord my soul to keep. I wish to die before I wake b/c the Devil lives with me and touches my ungodly place' It like this would be another peace for someone to spawn another Im over it peace.
Enough of me speaking
Enjoyed the peace Syn
Stay blessed poet
I enjoyed the entire peace as a whole and this line ~~~>"When I am
On my knees
Cause Lord knows
I am down
On my luck
I believe a good deal of folx can Amen ya digg Again enjoyed the scribe. Stay blessed poets
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