Commented on the poem "if you only knew" on 01/18/08 at 12:55 AM
wow, ma this was beautful, thats a real type of love, and you expressed it wonderfully. Im freakin speechless, I mean damnm this hit home for me. love it
Commented on the poem "unsured" on 01/18/08 at 12:50 AM
alrite mamaz i feel you on this one, Im unsure too. I agree with verse, sometimes it is better to be unsure. Good poem, definitely relateble.10 of those things
short, but you said everything that needed to be said, very descriptive, you usage of words is so sick to me, I mean wow, you are an amazing poet. so this poem is quite familiar with me because when I moved away I was so depressed, I couldn't leave my room for nothign in this world this poem really describes my personal space at the time
Commented on the poem "The "I" Virus" on 01/12/08 at 01:01 AM
boy you are a poetry genious if that makes any sense, so creative, I love it sweets, I mean this is so real, I mean there has been times where my results cam out positive , but not anymore, Im willing to learn, be open, knowledge is power.
yo this was a cool poem, I aint neva experienced being the chick on the side, but im feeling what you're sayingm this was a good poem, good scenario, i loved it