Commented on the poem "Still Bleeding" on 11/20/09 at 03:43 PM
Rain becomes the only antidote to Pain......Say no more, that's the line for me right there, captured me well, hope it has the same effect on others, definitely feeling this piece.....thumbs up, I have some bleeding to do
Commented on the poem "watching u die" on 11/20/09 at 04:03 AM
Dam, dam, i see you got alot things to say my G, word play crazy.....you dropping so hard knowledge over here, my brother....heavy on the mental
Commented on the poem "BLACK/WHITE" on 11/20/09 at 04:00 AM
This is a crazy scribe, strong piece, word play definitely the factor in your writing as i see... very good my g
Commented on the poem "Be about it" on 11/20/09 at 03:58 AM
The flow is and the word play is def good, strong lines though brief....
my line, my life is over before I'm 29. Do or Die...heavy
Commented on the poem "GONE IN A FLASH" on 11/20/09 at 03:43 AM
Wow, wow,,,,this brought tears to my eyes, for the fact, dam..dam...wow, i dont even know how to finish my comment, this is a fav, i need to keep this on top on my favs at all times...wow....wow...
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Commented on the poem "Still Bleeding" on 11/20/09 at 03:43 PM
