An empty feeling lingers...somber and sad in a painful realization...seeingly intimate piece...very moving even if moving to sadness...moving none the less
Beautiful...reminds me of the introduction to Kahlil Gibran's " The Prophet" though you undoubtedly leave impressionable expressions upon a mind
Commented on the poem "To Love Again..." on 11/14/09 at 04:45 AM
After a while love...through its worst or best, either or, will eventually convince all that any attempt in its direction is worthwhile...but you already know this...as you have revisited, re-written, revised and re-read a thousand times...imagine that
Commented on the poem "Beautiful Enigma" on 08/24/09 at 04:16 AM
You describe him vividly yet the taste enjoyable...especially to see my kind described in a positive light
Commented on the poem "our pride" on 08/24/09 at 04:12 AM
Again...the speech is different and simple...but it says a great deal...as if some street fabler...nice work
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Commented on the poem "Even the sun is down.." on 11/17/09 at 06:51 PM
