wow nice write i wrote a poem similiar to this kalled living n my mind
we live n out mind to escape the hard times.We live in our fantasy
kuz itz hard to live n reality
nice write
My future is looking bright
and the past is left behind
Commented on the poem "Slow Dance" on 11/16/09 at 10:03 PM
nice seduction poetic flow
Commented on the poem "Help The Child" on 11/16/09 at 09:53 PM
yung gurlz like to put picture of them pregnant on myspace like itz cool.I tell them u let a dick kum inside u raw and u not even married .real succeful give yourself a handclap and a pat on the back..anothre basterd being born n dis world.
Commented on the poem "Help The Child" on 11/16/09 at 09:51 PM
yea itz so sad how yung people thank itz cool to have kidz and kant even take care of them
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Commented on the poem "My Own Wonderland" on 11/23/09 at 02:54 PM
