Commented on the poem ""Nick of Time"" on 11/18/09 at 06:22 PM
This was more like a story than a poem. You have an amazing gift of describing things in intricate detail..i really like that, not everyone can do that. This was very inviting..i like your style, well done!
I'm not even going to lie..im a real harsh person at judging poems but i liked this it was tasteful but real. Its like when you write you kinda freestyle and just let it all flow hmm? Good job keep it up b!
LOOL, you know...you could actually be talking about me :p - except the fact that i'm a tarus..minor blip tho..all else is true lol! I liked it, good job, i see when you visualise things you go all out. Well done!
Aw This was nice, a kind of sweet lyrical erotic poem, simple and tasteful. Nice work!!!
Commented on the poem "HAPPY BIRTHDAY!" on 02/20/09 at 05:21 PM
This is soooooo adorable. I reeally see a difference from the writing you used to subit almost two years ago..you have grown and this was a wonderful tribute to your baby boy, good job Eso, 10 for me!
GSP Is The Place To Be lol
October 29, 2007 at 10:16 PM
Yellow peopleee, im new to this site (my boy slim cutta showed me about it knowing of my poetical interests) and i just wanna say im loving it.
Started talking to some crazy talented writes on here..reading some stuff thats mind blowing...possibly even life changing, but definately perspective enhancing.
I just wanna say thank you everyone for those fantastic pieces of art and thank you everyne who has showed me much love..its much appreciated.
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Commented on the poem ""Nick of Time"" on 11/18/09 at 06:22 PM
