Commented on the poem "Country Girl" on 07/23/09 at 06:30 PM
Preach it!!!, I love this one, love the part where you say " You left me to "Find" you" real shit, and big ups for sticking with your husband, you kept it real with the one that stuck by you, that all a man can ask for. Chea!!!
Very wise words, just like Black Prince, you are very good with writing Haiku's not just following the syllable rules but actually having meaning in the words, you seem to have mastered it, I'm enjoying the responses, 10
Commented on the poem "COMING ABOARD" on 06/06/09 at 02:24 AM
Okay, I'm following all these responses backwards and I am starting to get the story line between you and Blessed straight, but it seems you like these Haiku's now you going to Tanka's huh, nice.
I think that you put me up on something new, when you have time explain to me if you don't mind, what a Tanka is, it seems like it is something simular to a Haiku, but you have so much knowledge when it comes to poetry. 10
I'm not sure what Tanka means but I'm gone read Blessed's poem and maybe that will clear it up for me, i will come back and comment on it when i figure it out, sounds like something for the ladies thoe.
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Commented on the poem "Country Girl" on 07/23/09 at 06:30 PM
