Nickname:T.R.I.G.G.U.S. Country:United States City:of the forgotten... realm of the shadows... State:VA Gender:Male Age:24 Member Since:Apr 19, 2007 Last Login:Apr 19, 2009 Poems Submitted:218 Poem Comments:2,631 Poem Views:28,616 Member Comments:934
Commented on the poem "What is love?" on 04/14/09 at 08:59 PM
i've found love is defined by the person searching for its definition. in my own journey, i've come closer to "what is love?" by finding out what isn't love. first lesson i learned, first love is very misleading. experience builds wisdom and i see you already are wise to question this. very emotional, i see your passion for that you felt was "love", the desire to hold on to it. good for the long run. good stuff.
Commented on the poem "transparent soul" on 04/14/09 at 05:57 PM
i've myself often wondered what people see when they set eyes upon me. trully enjoyed the comparison, people claim they know you like you're transparent yet if you have yet to find yourself, how can they trully know or even begin to understand you. touched on a good note there. seems we may all have a bit of an opaque soul. good stuff.
i must say, your work has seen some advancing since last i crossed paths with this profile. a vivid story told by one of natures most popular weather changes. personified the human emotions that lay within the rain, as it would seem, nature's oldest story teller. very nice work. as well as the track adds to the mind's conception of this concept.
all i can say to this, is that was one hell of a night. provided you can remember a night like that the next morning, that will serve as some memories you won't forget. nice stuff.
Commented on the poem "confused" on 04/12/09 at 12:21 PM
its amazing how the emotions seem to be a living, breathing organism. they make their own decisions with little to no input from our conscious mind. many times leaving us at their mercy. confusion, though a pain, is usually temporary. you did a good job of showcasing the mind during the confusing times of choice. good stuff.
The end is here... R.I.P.
January 14, 2009 at 01:04 AM
where he came from...
...is where he returns to
"The death of a presence... marks the birth of a legacy..."
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Commented on the poem "What is love?" on 04/14/09 at 08:59 PM
