Nickname:tyniee79 Country:United States City:Lone Tree State:CO Gender:Male Age:29 Member Since:Nov 25, 2007 Last Login:Sep 26, 2009 Poems Submitted:68 Poem Comments:142 Poem Views:2,286 Member Comments:32
So much love, feeling and emotion in this. Some may say these terms are the same but they are not. Short but easy to enjoy as I'm sure many fall into a relationship that is somewhat perfect, but they push love away. And thank you for not using TYPING slang!!!!
Commented on the poem "*Awakened*" on 08/06/09 at 07:05 PM
What can I truly say wrong. This piece was well written with a flow that just melts to the readers eyes like ice cream under the sun. As a personal preference, I think this poem would read easier if all the words were spelled out. But regardless, a great write here!
You know, I went into this poem thinking that it may not be as intense as some of the others because it was written from such an emotional stand point. But corrected I stand. As always, a great story wrapped in a terrific flow. Propz
Commented on the poem "streets" on 08/06/09 at 06:54 PM
So I was wondering why this poem was overlooked when I checked out the profile. I am glad I took the time... This poem, although short, releases so much emotion that it pits you right in the middle of the environment you are experiencing. Loved it... Mad propz.
Commented on the poem "LIFE OF TEARS" on 08/06/09 at 06:49 PM
I am really diggin this work of art. There's so much inner feeling that I'm sure a lot of people can't relate to where other can easily. Although I loved the word play, I think if every word was written out, it would read and flow so much better. Propz from me!
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Commented on the poem "where im at is not where i should be" on 08/26/09 at 07:57 PM
