Nah I’ll just keep it all in
Blowing kisses in the wind
Hoping her lips they’ll find
I’ll continue to converse and look
And keep expressing to her
My thoughts of how she’s got me shook
Between the lines of my quiet notebook
Commented on the poem "OK........" on 10/21/09 at 12:31 AM
So only becuz I know every woman b4 has prolly asked, i will not ask for your tongue to dry me off, EVEN THOUGH I\'m a lil wet from reading this poetry... LOL!!! yea PAMO!!!... you stop scribing for a while my brotha... and i\'m glad you \'dun picked that pen up again... Loves this... kinda makes me miss ole GS...NOT!!!!!!!!!!!! but yeah baby... you keep on scribging.. i\'ve keep sneaking back in here and reading....
Commented on the poem "Sincerely, Sorry" on 10/21/09 at 12:24 AM
I AM a special need..
an acquired taste, even to myself.
Commented on the poem "I See You" on 10/21/09 at 12:21 AM
I wonder..
can I survive.. if I commit suicide?
Kill us?
Cause keeping us alive
kills me..
and Im only 1/2 the woman I am.. w/o u.
I see you kinda sorta still in that \"don\'t give a care mood\"... this was nice.. I wanna stae my fav part, but I want it to show just like is does in the piece so i wont cut, copy and paste it here...then it will be all jumbled up and it will loose that affect.... ugh!..GS *smh*... great scribe poet!
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Commented on the poem "NOTEBOOK CONFESSIONS" on 10/21/09 at 12:33 AM
