oh to be loved like this...vivid image...music sets it off. Another wow write. I'm melting too. splendid piece.
Commented on the poem "Gangsta Lovaz" on 01/23/09 at 04:47 PM
Alright now... I read the response before the original... and let me tell you it's two sides of the same coin, You got the female take on it, E's got the male take on it... just as it should be. This was hot!! What a write. You two are crazy. It all just works...and works and works. Love ur pen, sis.
"Bobbing...weaving...Honey Blonde...tracks pulling" lmao... I LOVE THIS. U inspire me. Brilliant. the flow, the wordplay, the layout...the subtly in erotica...the way it should be...just left to the imagination...ur hot!
Commented on the poem "I found you!!!!" on 01/23/09 at 04:30 PM