Commented on the poem "Here GEL" on 10/27/09 at 06:09 PM
"open your matrix books
to Leviticus
and follow its placement
of ceremonial law
following our Genesis,
then note the enslaved Exodus,
if you must,
to raise up this law "
"matrix books"...what??? did you really just say that and make me grin from ear to ear, take the words right off of my tongue...?? yea, you need to write some more Poetry so I can have something lovely to read...sublime, Queen
Commented on the poem "Precious times" on 10/27/09 at 06:05 PM
"Before I made love a tawdry affair
I found shelter in the arms of your affection
My joy was being me
Your joy I came to see
And when we focused on the sex
We made love die"
I'm diggin' your Pen, Divine...may make me stop by gs more than I have been of late
Commented on the poem "love story" on 10/27/09 at 05:59 PM
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