Nickname:VIC Country:United States City:KANSAS CITY State:MO Gender:Female Age:24 Member Since:Jan 27, 2007 Last Login:Oct 29, 2009 Poems Submitted:11 Poem Comments:44 Poem Views:754 Member Comments:16
PREACH!! girl you better let them know!! People are such frauds!! Everywhere I turn around there is a new one!! Someone getting close just to tear you down!! I have a friend (associate) that in my time of need she always running!! But she is the firsst one to say what she would do. LOL!! Good Write
Commented on the poem ""We" No More" on 03/20/09 at 12:08 AM
Damn!! Girl, you really poured your soul out in this one!! Like, I could feel where you were coming from. Like why when he had you things didnt work out.. Last line, summed it up all together!! You have to remind yourself of the bad things so you wont be hurt!!!
Commented on the poem "One Night Stand" on 03/19/09 at 11:41 PM
it sounds like you guys had a heck of a time!! why just make it a one night stand? even if you're arent into relationships, folks have causal sex all the time!! LOL!! Good Write, kept me interested with every line!! Wasnt vulgar or anything!! KUDOS
Commented on the poem "EXCUSES" on 03/19/09 at 11:33 PM
WOW!! dang kidd I LOVE it!! fave line.. "being number one million in your life" Like that sums it all up!! No one wants to feel like this!! No one!! When you decided you wanted her had to have her it was too late. Thats so real!! thats how its really done!! The excuses, hate to admit it.. i have heard them all before!!
Commented on the poem "should it matter" on 03/19/09 at 11:28 PM
Man, KUDOS!! I feel this poem!! I know how it is to start something new and folks want to destroy it!! Make you feel like you you have made a bad decision!! Good job on expressing your point of view!! Tell the haters to EAT ROCKS (not kick em) LOL!!
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Commented on the poem "So Called Friends" on 03/20/09 at 12:14 AM
