i like but i think it would be better if it was longer try to put some more felling into it next time but good work keep it up
Commented on the poem "gal i loveu" on 12/07/07 at 08:41 AM
how sweet die 4 some 1 u love that cute an di love how u put ur words but good write keep it up and i wo uld love to have more of this poem to read
Commented on the poem "love thing" on 12/07/07 at 08:39 AM
aww i like this poem u put ur fellings out and in to this poem good write but i wish bthat i could of have read more and good luck in finding that 1
Commented on the poem "A World So Cold" on 11/29/07 at 08:03 AM
nice poem sounds like u miss u grandma a lot but it sounds like u got a lot going on and a lot of choices to make but make sure there good ones 10 stars good work
Commented on the poem "Who I am" on 11/28/07 at 11:37 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i like u r flow u bring it real hart and i like how u used names in u shit nice work keep it up
all about me
March 05, 2007 at 08:40 AM
every thing i do i do because of me i do what i want win i want cuzz i can in if u dont like it go fuc* ur self lol but really i and a nice person if u treat me right then i will treat u right. i have no kids and dont wont non in less they come.i like to have fun shop party and just chill with my friends i do not start trouble it all ways come to me and wen it do i shut it down.
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