Nickname:Will charles Country:United States City:Brooklyn State:NY Gender:Male Age:22 Member Since:Jun 19, 2007 Last Login:Mar 30, 2009 Poems Submitted:18 Poem Comments:429 Poem Views:3,607 Member Comments:77
Hmmmm I like this, its a very interesting and nice piece.
Commented on the poem "I Could've" on 12/18/08 at 09:03 AM
Hmmm wow umm this is a very interesting piece there's certainly a powerful emotion but I'm not sure if its really hate. Certainly hating what has become and feeling bitter, but this has a certain sadness and coldness to it, feeling of neglect and loneliness and disgust. All the the act didn't occur just they way you talked about it made it seem and feel so. Also with all the excplictness is was erotic but in a darken kinda way, lol. Very nice piece, its crative, unique and different. Good job, keep it up.
Commented on the poem "Revealing Hearts" on 12/18/08 at 08:46 AM
Hmmm I really like this one a whole lot its my fav from you that I've read thus far. I got to say however line 5 starting with the Difference is on down to line 8 ending with, one day they may fall. Those 4 lines right there just really stood out to me. That's was a great flow right there with the repetition, rhyem scheem, the way it flowed and what you said. That's my fav part and the reason why I'm making this a fav. Keep it up
Commented on the poem "You're Perfect" on 12/18/08 at 08:38 AM
Ok I really like this real cute ending. I think that this was very well written and put together. Nice job
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Commented on the poem "My Teenage Love" on 01/28/09 at 04:08 PM
