This piece was pure fire, I just got to say Da Champ and Pure Black drowned the paper in some ill ink. Great choice of song to. Keep letting the ink bleed and I'll keep reading.
Impressive write, this piece was on fire. I agree with Dimplez though, the background is a little distracting, but nonetheless a great write. Keep it up.
Commented on the poem "IF" on 11/21/09 at 10:50 PM
Great write, you have a wonderful display of emotions in this piece. A lot of people ask the questions if, why, what and am I when it comes to the ones they love. This should have hit home for a lot of people. Keep em coming, I'll keep reading.