Nickname:x 0h bOi itZ jR Country:United States City:iN Mii oWn w0rlD State:NJ Gender:Male Age:23 Member Since:Dec 09, 2007 Last Login:Mar 05, 2009 Poems Submitted:19 Poem Comments:11 Poem Views:888 Member Comments:6
Commented on the poem "Gone" on 03/22/08 at 08:50 AM
wow
this is truly a deep piece i can somewhat relate to what you are saying my favorite lines in the poem are as follows:
I just want everything to be okay,
my life to feel right, true, and strong.
The dysfunction, misunderstandings,
and impurity instantly I want to be gone.
you kind of left me hanging. it was a rwally good piece and i am looking for the continuation of this. it is very sensuala nd the imagery you portay in this is so vivid in my mind.
Commented on the poem "Waitin 4 u" on 03/22/08 at 08:42 AM
you rhymes pure and got straight to the point. i love this piece of work... keep up the good work.
Commented on the poem "1-19-2007" on 03/22/08 at 08:39 AM
i love how you stand up for a love so true. keep up the good work. you are very expressive in this piece my favorite two lines are :
We started off as friends
W ended up as lovers.
Who would ever think we felt this way about each other?
Commented on the poem "Night's Dream" on 03/22/08 at 08:15 AM
you truly have a real talent fot imagery. this piece of work is truly amazing. i truly could close my eyes and visualize your words as they were written. as reading the scenery became real inside my head. keep up the good work
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Commented on the poem "Gone" on 03/22/08 at 08:50 AM
