Nickname:'x'GhOsT'x' Country:Canada City:Check my poetry/songs out I return da favor State: Gender:Male Age:17 Member Since:May 30, 2008 Last Login:Sep 24, 2008 Poems Submitted:251 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:930 Poem Views:7,072 Member Comments:52
Commented on the poem "Stay On Track," on 09/02/08 at 08:22 AM
Well since this is your first try .. I'm going to give you a 10 .. The syllables are wrong though .. you did .. 5,8,5 its suppose to be 5,7,5 good job though
wow i did this short and never realized it By the way people this was a freestyle
Commented on the poem "L.I.F.E" on 09/02/08 at 02:21 AM
Very good for your first one try to explain it a bit better though I really like it and I'm going to do a response so watch out for it :P 10 stars
Commented on the poem "Without You'" on 09/02/08 at 01:19 AM
This is mad ill , I respect it cause its coming straight from the hearts , N , are you talking about Teresa LOL probably nice though I loved the flow 10 stars without a doubt
Commented on the poem "FREESTYLE #3" on 09/01/08 at 05:32 PM
This was good , I liked it , Very true , Life's really hard , N , You were born Jane N Finch ? ? But , Yeah , I liked it a lot , Nice lyrics , N , Flow , I'm going to give you 10 stars without a doubt keep doing this good stuff
Yo
August 15, 2008 at 05:42 AM
Yo , I dono what to write here right now so haha sure