Nickname:XGMGrand Country:United States City:Atlanta State:GA Gender:Male Age:22 Member Since:Jul 21, 2008 Last Login:Oct 10, 2008 Poems Submitted:23 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:55 Poem Views:760 Member Comments:8
Commented on the poem "Rare" on 08/14/08 at 03:29 AM
Def not what i was expecting when i first saw the title, so you def have the surprise factor. Loved the rhyme scheme and the flow of the piece and the topic is real. Great piece to showcase and a brilliant way to display the emotions and thoughts of both parties
Commented on the poem "Morning Head" on 08/11/08 at 04:10 AM
Def not the worst thing to wake up to in the morning... The thing that sticks out the most tho is the marriage concept and how that was tied in. Definitely did not foresee that and i think it really made it great because this turned from just erotic to a special gesture.
This write is straight to the point and i usually don't get into that when reading but this was creatively done. I like the scheme and pattern of it all. And it was definitely captivating and full of imagery.
Commented on the poem "I Didn't Mean To" on 08/07/08 at 03:24 PM
yeah i definitely read the poems out of order, but again same compliments as How Many Ways... a great story and captivated and attention.
Commented on the poem "How Many Ways" on 08/07/08 at 03:19 PM
Great story telling within this poem and definitely a great deal of sacrifice at the end i wasn't expecting. I enjoyed reading it, it held my attention cuz i wanted to know what was gonna happen next. Great write again
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Commented on the poem "Rare" on 08/14/08 at 03:29 AM
