damn... been there before... i can mos def relate to that.... thats just how it be sometimes... loved the free flow of emotion in this.. *sighs* if it were only that simple.... i enjoyed this one slim!
wow! i loved that ending.. it sum'd up this piece beautifully. "I stop living like death
and you
start seeing what is alive
then we can fulfill our destiny
and fly" i agree this is mos def the type of poetry for the books.. i love it... I wish i could bottle up ur words and carry them around with me! lol
Commented on the poem "Devils Interlude" on 12/02/08 at 10:30 AM
very interesting joint here and i agree with jody on this one.... i also agree i think there should be a part 2 to this one.. it left a lot unanswered but i think thats the beauty of it.. im able to form my own thoughts and realities of what this is...nice
the imagery here was beautiful.. i felt like i was actually listening to this song.... hypnotizing me as well... "so tonight he leads
and we are the choir
Boom base drum
like a strong heartbeat
as the repeat repeats
all feet move
it is a harmony vibes " i loved that part...
Commented on the poem "Nightmares" on 12/02/08 at 10:26 AM
again the ending to this one pretty much sum'd up the whole poem for me... but even tho i wish nightmares didnt exist i am grateful that they do... if nightmares didnt exist i would get lost in dreams as if life were deemed perfect and we know there is no perfect world... a beautiful idea tho.. i truly enjoyed this....
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