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"memories"
  by trinabeana


I laugh through my cries, while crying on my own shoulder..
marking the air with my memories
vivid is the remembrance of a love,
a love that held me
a love that warmed me
your love, which soothed me
but, then..
your love doomed me,
by literally consuming me
with..
memories..
of your..
sooo perfect love,
yet,
I'm me..
dripping my tears onto this page,
that page..
nothing is ever clear.
Now, blankly, I stare
marking the air with my memories
memories that will always continue to walk side by side
with me
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Date Submitted: Feb 17, 2008 (06:11 AM)
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  Jody
04/01/08 (01:05 PM) 
Feelin' this & relating to this... I've written a piece call "Memories" as well(not on gs) but like your last line how the memories will continue to walk side by side, they were soothing for me but memories can also be haunting when we want/need to release them to move forth... when the bliss is over and reality needs to set it... great piece.

  Pip
03/30/08 (08:22 PM) 
Beautiful poem, great job on it. I'm almost crying because it really reminds me of alot of stuff. Keep up the good work 10 stars

  mslolabuns
03/10/08 (04:23 AM) 
wow mama... "this is deep... dripping my tears onto this page, that page.. " only something that a true poet can say... i agree with Styles there are two different ways to read this... thats talent ma... keep up the good writes... and keep your head up because memories keep us from repeating mistakes... 10+ sMiLe!!!

  unforgivenange...
02/28/08 (07:43 AM) 
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!!! yes our memories stay with us forever, sometimes guiding us through when times are tuff.. You have great strength, and compassion, that comes through on your writings god bless :)

  Big B00
02/22/08 (10:39 PM) 
excellent write

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