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"mental murder"
  by me-me


Mental murder

Stalking my mental like the predator you are

Watching my every thought from some where afar

Targeting my emotions zooming in on my self worth with a purpose knowing your going to strangle my hope

Picturing my mental demise by the hands of the hang mans rope

You planned it out so I guess this would be premeditated

Breaking down my defenses while you sit silently waiting

Catch me alone and commit your evil deed

Knowing you will get away for you have entered all my dreams

Saying to yourself my screams you hope no one has heard her.

Congratulating yourself on getting away with the perfect mental murder
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Date Submitted: Sep 08, 2009 (04:50 PM)
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  Planted Daisie...
10/10/09 (07:48 PM) 
very creative way of putting together this write...captured my attention from the start....nicely done

  BSavvy
10/10/09 (07:33 PM) 
Whew!! You went in girl and this was deep, the title alone caught my attention.... "Breaking down my defenses while you sit siliently waiting catch me alone and commit your evil deed knowing you wil get away for you have entered all my dreams Saying to yourself my screams you hope no one has heard her Congratulating yourself on getting away with the perfect mental murder" <---- What that was hot.....

  The Clinician
09/26/09 (02:02 PM) 
Very innovative, you definitely got skillz poet. Keep inkin and I'll keep listenin.

  DarqBeauty
09/17/09 (06:08 PM) 
I like where you're going with this one, mental invasion, very captivating subject.

  Showcase
09/14/09 (10:23 PM) 
I loved it reminds me of one of earlier poems very creative, I love thw mental thoughts toying with you the story line was amazing kept me there until the end.pEACE.elevate

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