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"Message"
  by Azon


Damn shorty take it slow/let me know if u need a hero/back in the projects,with your back against the wood/
slipping hard and life's to hard to think good/money comes in to slow/half a brother sailing dope/no hope stored up at the end of the road/
can't believe to many lies in this world, to many died in this world/bodies stacked on top of one another/
can't see love coming to our future mothers/the struggle is real, but still we try to hide it by over dosing on pills/
drugs numbing the rain,but in the end it won't change/some how I figured we're motivation by pain/
hardship tatted on my vain's/the burn of bullets,flesh pulling, tears growing/dirt throwing understand why I'm flowing/
can't let the world put me under when I die creay meat me/so I can return to the world when it thunders/
live the same life as my color/fit to strive over my numbers that commit suicide/close your eyes and look to the sky/
picture the words I speak can u see the leaders that died for u in me/hard to tell if they're happy about there future/
black on black brown on brown, we need to get together and clean up this sound/help the youth pick them selfs up from the ground/
feel how they feel and help them out/they don't need a preacher they need a teacher/a mother and father feature/
Cassidy written on walls/Can All Streets & Society Infrom Da Youth/teach them the true no age limit can stop the groups/
don't abandon the world/feed them food/war isn't the issue nor is gas/we need to think of our future and not focus on our past/
as we dream/the words "Free At Last"/

Verse Off My New Song entitled Message
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Date Submitted: Aug 22, 2008 (01:14 PM)
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  *Jazique*
06/15/09 (01:38 AM) 
This message is a good one...nicely done

  sexycarmel08
03/21/09 (09:01 PM) 
I like tis poem...... U really put ur mind n heart into tis poem.... Good job!!!!!!!!

  chanice
12/26/08 (03:06 PM) 
itz the truth this is hot keep it up

  WIZ
10/09/08 (07:03 AM) 
that awlsome, it speaks volumes and lots of truth! nice drop!

  bookitty
09/14/08 (07:06 PM) 
I really liked this piece. I thought it was very creative to draw the contrast between life and love so direct and raw. Good job, great read... Boo Kitty

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