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"Mii Apology.."
  by BabyBoySpik


I remember sayin once, tht ur too beautiful to be havin troubles..
Told u tht u could be treated bettr if u give me the opportunity..
But lyk everii other dude, I hurt u the same waii..
And itz crazii CUZ I STiiLL REMEMBER TO THIS DAii!!
Tht I shattered the glass tht was comin together..
Realizin in the end, it wasnt for the bettr..
I gave awaii a dollar for a dime
A car for a bike
Even a Studio for a mic!!!
But worst of all, A Love for a Like
And I apologiez, Realtalk..
No joke
In all seriousness, I apologiez
Not clearly seein wut I had wit these eyez
Took a moment for me to actuallii visualize
Tht, mayb I should have just waited
Good things happen for the person who waitz..
Even if it was from State to State..
But I dnt think u ever understood how bad I felt
Mii deepest emotionz, how sad I felt..
For breakin u down the waii I did
Not any bettr then those other lamez did..
Jus bein me, tht 17yr old kid
But now a lil older
Nd a lil smarter..
I saii this with more meanin..
I apologiez..
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Date Submitted: Jan 12, 2008 (03:38 AM)
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  danceluv08
02/04/08 (02:34 AM) 
i hope she forgave you ..u seem very deep and showed ya inner emotions which i like because most dudes dont do that..u put ya hear4t in this i could feel it..great job

  Y0UNG. FLYYY. ...
01/30/08 (08:51 PM) 
awww iz diz fa sally??¿¿

  Tiphani
01/25/08 (05:24 PM) 
This was a sweet apology poem. I can see that you were very sorry for what you did.

  ghetto
01/24/08 (05:03 PM) 
aawwwww that is so sweet..not many men apologize for thier mistakes..u got soul

  Sincero
01/23/08 (09:54 PM) 
damn bro.. sounds like u goin through the same shit im goin through.. lol.. but this is hot shit.. im diggin the write bro.. this is kinda how part 2 of mines is gna go, but not exactly the same

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