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"Mii Daii"
  by BabyBoySpik
  - This Poem is a response to the poem ALL URZ!! by PhillyQT


Damn babii
Last night you had me in the zone
Just you nd I
Us together all alone
It was onlii a tease tht you set on me
Somethn to start the beginning of the week
I know you dont lyk to just keep it at home
So letz get in the publik
Where I will make you moan
I know you lyk the beach, but we still got mondaii thru fridaii
I have somethn else in mynd, since todaii isz mii daii
I see tht your families together, for tht cookout
Itz ur motherz room tht i will bring you to a shout
Bout 20 to 30 all downstairsz
1 comesz up
And itz our seen tht she shares
Tellsz your momz az she comez up in flarez
But at the heat of the moment, fuqk it, who cares
She starin in craziness az we jus keep on goin
Yelling to stop, but our bodiesz keep flowin
Now they all upstairs curious to wutz happenin
All are surprised az I keep bangin it
Slapin, clapin, nd babii jus grabin it
I look to the side nd see someone take notes
Laughin out loud when they see you deep throat
"Not mii babii,"I hear your mother saii
I guess itz mii crib, this week you will staii
But it will not ruin this tym for u nd I
Letz rest for tomorrow
Your daii to decide
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Date Submitted: Apr 09, 2007 (12:40 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 05/12/07 (12:57 PM)
Author: PhillyQT
Poem Title: WORK DAII

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comment icon  COMMENTS (4)
  PoeticMama
05/18/07 (04:54 PM) 
DAMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN lolz yalll forced it for dis wunn .... they cum up da stairz but u still bangin her LMAO damn damn damn i dunt even knw wut to say but i already knew u were a lil-nasty anywayz lol KEEP WRITTIN REGARDLE$$

  REALKISSES
05/12/07 (01:26 PM) 
blazzzin hott write im luvin the tilte and ur word play is most def on point 10 stars

  $cooby
04/10/07 (11:15 AM) 
dizzzaaammmmmm sonn ....no wordz but u know watz good on it......i can defi\finetly fukx wit thiz shit ...blazed all over on it..!!! hahahahaaa

  Ce-Ce
04/09/07 (09:18 AM) 
O MA GOD!!!...Lmfaooo...Im havin a fukin laughin fit!!!...Im trippin off dis rite here "All are surprised az I keep bangin it Slapin, clapin, nd babii jus grabin it "...O my...Brah yall gon have ta stop dis farealz...Yall gon have me die laughin...Her momz???!!!...Fuk dat...Da whole fukin FAM!!!...Damn...U not watchin Jaiden n Sa'ria eida...Dun lost ya privladgez...Lmaooo...Dis wuz gud work Serg...Ya nasty ass...I wonder wuz gon happen nxt...Fukin in fronta da fam...smh...Lmaooo...I wanna c Ne...
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