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MrBroadcast Mind My Addiction
by MrBroadcast

In the time it takes me to write the words I love you I have thought it a million times and over a billion times before now come to a state of being that it is not just a thought but a way of life.

See for me to love you is as if I breathe for it is a constant thing.

There are coughs and gasps but those are but natural hiccups in the way of life.

But breathing never stops does it for if it did there would be no existence correct?

Resistance of something as powerful and natural as the love of your life would be suicide.


No reason to fight, no reason to dodge, no reason to altar, no reason to disregard

This is life and I want to breathe freely and open up my lungs and allow all the wonderful fresh air in.


As clear as the crystal image upon which our picture is present.

I realize the love I receive from you today is a present.

A gift if you prefer to look past my play on words but you should never look past the way I never play with my words.

So know that all the time my thoughts, feelings and words are here.

I need you take the time listen to them with open ears as you hear.

See I know it’s crazy to think that all is so easy and fluid.

Our complications are as complex as to brake like a brake line with no fluid.

A well kept machine is the way I want to build the base of our love.

And as a man standing in front of a woman to you passion, understanding, and communication I will give to you my love.

Mr. Broadcast
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Published: Apr 08, 2009 (12:09 AM)
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03/24/10 (06:22 AM) 
very well written and deep , enjoyed reading it. keep them coming.

  Raxxie
05/19/09 (08:00 PM) 
wow.. from beginning to end, this is a moving piece. its so expressive and real. gets a 10 from me!

04/14/09 (01:15 AM) 
better lae than never I say.... a good friend of mine recommended me to read you so I am here checkin you out and this piece is amazing.... for word selection to song choice... the emotional vibe connecting romantic is off the charts...... truly I enjoyed reading these poetics..... I gotta keep my eye out for more of ur work fam... u got it....

04/10/09 (10:08 AM) 
"There are coughs and gasps but those are but natural hiccups in the way of life" -- loved that line so much

04/10/09 (04:23 AM) 
As a man standing in front of a woman to you passion, understanding, and communication I will hive to you my love - I loved this from beginning to end. If only every male expression of deep feeling was this speak easy...does that make sense?? I just loved this piece! Good read!

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