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"MIRROR IMAGES () {} []"
  by CLASSICK
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Our Reflection by B. Rose


Man and Woman standing up having sex... Pictures, Images and Photos

i must be honest with you babe..................


i hear you diggin the sounds that i make
while inside you have my body sssshhhh---ssshhh-shakin'
this passionate love making...

don't get me wrong
cuz the way you enter me is so right...
then down below you gently kissssss...
this color of night, makes the moment more even intense
it's not that i dont want you to see my faces...
but i can't help it... the feelin forces me to cling the pillows to my teeth like braces...

our sweat intensifies the moment...
and the taste of salt becomes stained upon our tongues
then i run...
because i can feel... feel... feel... i'm about to cuuuummmm... i release...
you pull my hair back as if i'm on a leash
my knees become weak...
the only thing i can speak is...is... is...

mmmmm...
oooooooo...
ahhhhhhh...

you turn my mrz. brown eyes to bleached white
then it turns to morning from night...
as we cuddle under our reflection...
doing this in front of the mirror...yeeeessss the perfect selection...
i see you still holdingon to that erection......................

yup.. it's time...
press rewind

round 2........

(dedicated to: TVT)


Crown Royal - Jill Scott
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Date Submitted: Nov 11, 2008 (01:18 AM)
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  Sentinal
01/15/09 (01:25 PM) 
Wow that's a hot piece and the flow was on point. Very nice piece. 10stars

  Candice STone
11/26/08 (10:43 AM) 
I DIGG THIS ONE...DON'T DROP YA PEN

  StraY12
11/24/08 (05:24 PM) 
Damn...this was nice got that lil' style goin' on from the beginnin' then when you did the kisssss....I was like wow...then I kept readin', it adds that bit of imagery to it, like you catchin' a moment to hear your work and then you sense them sheets gettin' clutched! LoL, 10 stars!

  MR. BYRD
11/16/08 (11:32 AM) 
ok Classick and Rose....you really did it on this collab.....real talk, push that pen ya'll b-y

  Drew2007
11/12/08 (12:48 AM) 
DAMN... WHAT A RESPONSE.... LOVED IT.... THE FLOW WAS RIDICULOUS... 10 STARZ FROM MI.. KEEP EM COMIN.... UNTIL NEXT TYME. DUECEZ

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