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"Mirror Mirror on the Wall"
  by Donnie


Mirror Mirror, on the wall,
please tell me Im beautiful
tell me I have a cute face,
tell me that I cant be replaced,
deceive me if you must but still be kind,
you're my mrror so I wont mind,
just dont give me what I give to you,
please show my inner fantasy,
instead of the bitter truth,
dont tell me what you really see,
when Im with you I want sobriety from reality,
with you I feel so neat,
always whole although never complete,
I know you can tell than I feel so alone,
but if I recall I never asked for any emotions to be shown,
I come before you as an unmolded clay,
in exchange you rearrange my mental state,
and let me see what perfections isn't there,
it may be an illusion of the eye but I dont really care,
but in my defense Im fed up with the truth,
you cant manipulate it to get from it what you want to,
so Im deciding to manufacture my own reality,
and Im just getting you to do it for me,
so Mirror Mirror on the wall,
please tell me Im beautiful,
Mirror Mirror I beg of thee,
please say that....
YOU LOVE ME!.!.!
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Date Submitted: Aug 07, 2008 (05:40 AM)
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  L33NY LYNN
03/12/09 (10:31 PM) 
REAL DEEP!

  Phinest
03/03/09 (06:09 PM) 
If u need sum luv..much luv frm me 2 u...i dig the concept n the truthfullness of the subject....it comes a time n life when u feel like ur not worthy..ur not beautiful...theres no luv fa me....u kno wat when ur not luvin ur self or u feel unlove God still luvs u unconditionally...enuff of the wisdom...this is def a fav stay up n luv yaself u r worth lovin believe dat

  ♥Rosey&#...
08/07/08 (12:03 PM) 
I love you boo! I absolutely loved that concept. I mean, it was great, because I know that I'd rather see my inner beauty than my newfound fatness. lol I really dug this, and this is most definitely a fav. The concept was so real, just. . . boo they be sleepin on you baby!

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