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"Misunderstood or Mizunderstood"
  by Chocolate City


Young and educated..
At the same time.. Sophisticated..
Visions are empowering..
Walking in the world with a shield..
Patented in pink hearts..
And a melody of a sweet symphony..

Now is she misunderstood?
Or mizunderstood?

Subjective at the same time objective..
But never subject to be an object..
A poetically opinionated political prophet..
Speaking her heart with the pen..
Speaking her mind with her mouth..
And never holds back on what she wants to come out..

Now is she misunderstood?
Or mizunderstood?

Now there’s one thing I can’t stand..
How much she loves her Aqua Man..
A made up character in her mind..
She brings him up all the time..
Aqua Man can’t even swim
This is an insider between her and him..

Now is she misunderstood?
Or mizunderstood?

As I got to know her..
And watch our relationship grow..
I observed..
And I learned..
That this girl is both..
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Date Submitted: Jun 23, 2009 (12:57 AM)
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  NICKY BOO
07/06/09 (02:26 PM) 
wow!!! this is soooo nice choc....whoo do i smell romance?? lol wow ur wordflow is really bomb...sumone plz explain about thin aquaman person plz...lol no really this was a beautiful piece...this is a definate fav!!

  Mizunderstood
06/23/09 (03:32 PM) 
awww...and excuse me Aqua Man is a real person!!! and by u i guess i am Misunderstood...but by the readers this might b a mizunderstood piece. this was well put together by the way. it would b a nice poem even if it wasnt about mizundertood :-)

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