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"Mold Me You ( H H Breath Challenge)"
  by Tpoet
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Mold me you ( H H Breath Challenge) by Group: Heaven's Haven


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I want to inhale the breath you exhale
as you breathe poetically for me
Pouring into me your every word
Mold me you
Fire the kelm set it on high
Watch my temperature rise and my heart melt into clay throw me on the wheel spin me new colors of liquid kisses
That seeps through sealed lips
Let me drink of your mind savor its intensity lets freeze time and sit on the table only to rewind your smile when it’s wrapped around mine so I can exhale your breath poetically any you may inhale mine
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Date Submitted: Mar 30, 2009 (11:07 PM)
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  *~Raw Sensuali...
04/28/09 (09:00 AM) 
this makes me miss you...miss HH... miss the inspiration...and wow...that sculpture is AMAZING

  Poetic Lyricis...
04/22/09 (02:00 PM) 
That was so sweet---Love the scribe and pic is truly a work of art

  big josh
04/13/09 (04:39 PM) 
awwww this was a sweet write, very beautiful, nice write T :)

  Consciousness
04/09/09 (11:31 PM) 
The pic is awesome...and the poem speaks of deep passionate intimacy...Whoah two souls become one and your spoken words...Very good & well done...

  Ewe Debe
04/03/09 (11:28 PM) 
The pic here is perfect and I loved the title. Great write as usual I see you got the ink flowing again. :)

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