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"Moment Of Truth"
  by Mz Marie


Moment Of Truth


Runs deep in the heart
I hear a cry
cry out like a tiger
guilty as a thief
stolen from the moment
into the deep..
thought of what might of been
you and I as one ...
feel like smooth silk
love
rescue my soul from massive destruction
hurry..
....quick
subdue my emotional state..
with persuasion
dreams elapsing
reality unfolding..
your love runs deep
in my veins
i cant explain
so i just sit...
and remain
uncertain if its true
that love finds its way back to you
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Date Submitted: Oct 12, 2008 (08:55 PM)
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  ThepureBlackpo...
11/11/09 (12:26 AM) 
And my heart gently beats, as I relax mind and read this one more time...again its speaks volume and the tone is set in the beginning, and the mood in the room is already set for this piece,,,Enjoyable read on any day

  Trill
08/29/09 (07:47 PM) 
this one is deep and a great expression of your feelings.

  StraY12
07/01/09 (06:55 PM) 
This was nice I'm feelin' the way you just really let loose on this and as the title proves itself so does the writing...I mean nothing can get any more real with few words such as rescue my soul from massive destruction...hurry...quick...that's nice on it's own terms keep writing

  daidai_dts4l
06/24/09 (05:41 PM) 
o wow this was really deep . this was awsome the way you opened it and the way you closed it was great. 10 stars

  ***Choc***
06/22/09 (05:31 PM) 
O that was really nice....i would quote a favorite part but i love the whole thing....10 strz

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