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"Momma Rayve (To The Tune WIlliam Tell)"
  by Rayve


Wait for the song to get started (After the fanfare)

Go sit down on the ground. Put your toys away.
Quiet Down. SHUT UP NOW. I said not today!
I'll punch you in the chest now go away!
Do you Heeaaaaar the words I have to say?

Sit up straight. Clear your plate. Don't care what you like
Finish it or you'll be here all damn night.
What was that that you said under your breath?
Now eat the PEEEEAAAAA until there's none left

What? I'll sign that. Why the hell is crying comin out you mouth?
Keep it and I'll make sure I give you something real to cry about!
I have another conferece and where is that got damn clete
Loose this shit again and you will play barefeet


These are just some things my mom said to me and my siblings and I HAD to do it!

William Tell Overture (Abridged) - Gioacchino Rossini
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Date Submitted: May 27, 2008 (05:33 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (17)
  Jae 3stacks
05/29/08 (10:29 AM) 
lmfao this is jus too funny. i love it wit the music lmao i couldnt even keep the beat it was so funny.. great write

  bookum
05/29/08 (12:04 AM) 
oh that was raw. i really liked this piece. you really got your on style and it's on point.

  NINO
05/28/08 (03:22 PM) 
Damn, dis was funny as hell but also on some more real shit. Parenthood is a muthafucka aint it? LOL You brought alot of insight and I enjoyed it...nice work, sweetie

  angeleyes1
05/28/08 (03:09 PM) 
very funny and keeping it real very nicely written beautiful job keep those words flowing poet much love to you keep your head up

  Thaangel2018
05/28/08 (12:05 PM) 
That was cold, but I liked it. You already know what's tha deal. 10 starz and that's that. Hoffa.

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