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"monoply"
  by heartless


as you roll the dice in life you might get another try if you dont get a double
you're in trouble lies,money and jail,is your soul for sell of course its in the game of monolply .can you win yes if you try .be careful you have haters the hate to see you come up or become somebody your friends who thought you had back will let fall or walk into a wall people will sail you out again and again . decet and infadellity you will never get a moments peace, the game board is not always leved ask crackheads and prostitutes they'll tell you the truth. from rags to rich for better or for worst this game and sure make your heart burst, monoply can bring the good and bad in people only you can determine if you become a better man or woman , you fight and get shot oh the block is hot and it burns to aids and all other disease it spread with the quickness so prtect yourself please its common noloage that this game is called life and once god take his precious breath you'll never get another try.so play this game everyday as it was your last chance and dont let the game you change you, you change the game .
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Date Submitted: Dec 26, 2006 (10:45 PM)
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  .Mase Da Rula.
07/06/07 (12:10 AM) 
the struture is a bit throw offish.. maybe if you put it into stanza form.. but as far as it goes it was a nice read, excellent metaphors, and vivid images thru out.... keep it coming and let the words flow

  kocolee
05/10/07 (01:59 PM) 
good write kinda hard 2 read 4 me tho!, but u spitin some real talk here 4 real keep up the writing much luv and respect

  nywizdom
12/28/06 (08:18 AM) 
Nice write.

  sha-tamar
12/27/06 (10:40 AM) 
this is nice,3stars

  Anonymousse
12/27/06 (08:54 AM) 
i like your anology

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