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"Moth"
  by Bud Edward


little moth, you shine so bright

angelic self-directed kite

pity that you did not fight

when we called you from that height

you freely gave to us the right

to take your wings with our delight

perhaps you were just being polite

or maybe thought such things were trite

but now you struggle to take flight

and try and try with all your might

to get yourself far from our sight

you're tainted now, no longer white

upon you we have left our blight

and that vain effort brings such fright

we curse ourselves when comes the night

to punish us with loss of light

why did you smile instead of bite

now with guilt we feel your plight

and for ourselves we feel such spite

for through it all, our hearts were tight

even the sun will mourn tonight

and curse us for our shameful slight
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Date Submitted: Sep 29, 2007 (07:18 PM)
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  cado astrum
05/10/08 (01:47 PM) 
I'm sure I've told you countless times before how much I love your work, but reading it over gives me a newfound respect for it beyond even before. I find it's hard to write something that so consistently rhymes and it not sound a little....amateur, but you do it like an expert. I never cease to be impressed

  Scriptixz
10/01/07 (04:51 AM) 
but who do you speak of here? this is filled with so much remorse "even the sun will mourn tonight and curse us for our shameful slight"...i have not seen this format on this site ever!!! i cannot tell you how utterly entranced i am!!! *sighs* like i said before...your poetry is a breath of fresh air for long i have searched this site for poets such as you...i am so relieved!!!

  Stargurl07*
09/29/07 (08:08 PM) 
A nice write with a nice flow. Good job 10 stars

  Bud Edward
09/29/07 (07:19 PM) 
Written 09/13/03.

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