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"MOTHER APPRECIATED"
  by THE GOD WAR-CLOUD



.........Mother

Before you went home
After a long-lived hard fought contributing journey
I never got the chance to express my sincere profound devotion
For all the rewarding things you did

Which were remarkably appreciated

You came along
Saving a savage wrecked retched soul like mine
Taking me in when no-one else wanted to
Being more than willing to open your safe keeping doors
Even through I wasn't one of your own
Turning an ugly duckling into something uniquely handsome
Excepting my damage and severely scarred ensemble
With all it's unforeseen mental problems presented
Handling me with motherly's extreme care

And you was more than truly appreciated

Even though tough love was always given
Leaving me to sometimes wonder and questioning my family worth
I still looked towards you for your own special blend of parental guidance
Teaching and instilling within me life's saving proverbs
That remain imbedded upon the warrior constructed fibers of my internal being this very day

In which were sincerely appreciated

So to me
There's no greater hero
That can come close to measuring up your guardian angelic like presence
Sent from heaven's sanctified sanctuary

And if you can somehow hear me
I want you to know that
I watch the shining sun
Burning bright for you

Cause you are so appreciated

My prevailing heart stays joyously warm
That's why I wrote this poem for you
Just a small token of heartfelt affectionate dedication
Shown for all you did

Proving my appreciation
Giving from you
One of GOD's special virtuous queens

Thank you Mother
Forever you'll be most appreciated
May these cherishing thoughts of you
Carry on through all eternity

I love you always.....................

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Date Submitted: Nov 02, 2009 (12:05 AM)
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11/07/09 (10:02 PM) 
This is by far one of the most tuching writes you have ever written love. A mother's love can never be replaced. It's one of a kind. She would be most proud of you. You are moving the right direction. Keep it going War Cloud. I Foresee some great things in store. But nywayz. Beautifully done....

  no shit.itsana...
11/04/09 (02:26 PM) 
A monther's love is so deep...accepting and guiding us onward. Love the expression...she hears.

  D.K Lord of Da...
11/02/09 (03:57 AM) 
Bows Head, Inhales & Exhales...Dang fam this piece was exceptional.Every word you wrote here I could relete to.. These reached in and even grabbed hold of the Lord of Darkness and brought light.... For these are the words I have looked to express to my mother before her passing... Respect on a beautiful piece...DK

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