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"Motherly Fool"
  by shantae


I\'m gonna tell you what\'s a motherly fool shes a person

dose\'nt feed her children any food, She\'s a person that

hurts inside and takes it out on her kids everyday, Shes a

person that dose\'nt look for a good way, A Motherly fool

place\'s her kids under her man, They could be walking the

streets she dont give a damn, A Motherly fool sales her

body for drugs, A motherly fool falls for those fake thugs, A

Motherly fool sales her children for nothing but dope, Are

you a Motherly fool NO i hope! A Motherly fool put\'s her life

in Hell, She\'s also a person at the end that gets send too

Jail!
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Date Submitted: Jan 25, 2007 (04:45 PM)
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  Lani
03/14/07 (08:05 PM) 
wow this is so tru an powerful

  **NISEY**
03/12/07 (07:14 PM) 
Wow!!!!! thats so true now day's...deep one right here.

  Mizz Mafia Pri...
02/06/07 (05:15 PM) 
DATS TRUE IN SOME CASES SHANTAE, I WAS FEELIN THE POEM A LOT, I KNOW OF A "MOTHERLY FOOL" WHO TREATS HER KIDS LIKE THAT, AND ALL I CAN DO DAILY IS PRAY FOR THEM AND THEIR MOTHER, U KNOW THEIRS A LOT OF FATHERLY FOOLS TOO, U SHOULD MAKE THAT A PART 2, KEEP EM COMIN GIRL, 4 STARZ

  Jae X'em
02/05/07 (01:56 AM) 
yo dis is disrespectful im locked up right now but im no a motherly...? or a fool? nah but dis is hot good work

  lilneph
02/01/07 (02:00 PM) 
feelin it mos def (hot write) i pray sum moms wouldn't be like dat but hey....shits tough did u check up on my latest poem??if u didn't please check up on dat #1

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