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*Inspired by Esoteric's Wierdo piece.... in a way*
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She was
the mothership
...
body like
big bang theory
something like
an ill equipped vessel
made for
super star troopers
...
He was
space cowboy
looking for next rodeo
requesting access
to her land of funk
...
and
as eyes
attached
...
magnetic fields
instantly adjoined
star crossed souls
by the hips
.
cosmic belts
slipped
.
he jumped
aboard the
mothership
.
and his big dipper
spooned within
creamy milky ways
as her legs
began to permanently point
^ ^
| |
| |
| |
north
.
.
.
like star
.
ass bouncing
replicating hydrolics
west coasting speed ways
like low rider car
...
he became her moon
stuck within her gravitational pull
happily revolving around she
...
and he
nightly
took her out for a spin
straddling her body across vast galaxies
becoming lost within
space continuums
partaking in endless
tantric lovemaking watching she
suck away mini men
...
again & again
they would
flip.reverse.shift.stick.
smash.crash.& dash through skies
.
.
.
until
.
.
.
he abandoned her looking
for another mothership
to fly
...
i realluy like this i mean, com'on now 'He was space cowboy lQQking for the next rodeo..." Uc what i like is how You kept the metaphoric imagery intact w/o no deviation/aberration. The flow of this piece is word wicked perfect. &the picture You chose 2accompany the piece is 'perfect.'
This is the best Candace raisin' Cane~~the sweetest.