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"Moving On"
  by RjC


I will never understand your mentality;
why you chose the path you have taken.
Did we hurt you in some way that I am not aware?
I think not.

I just cannot comprehend your brutality;
you act righteous, but are deeply mistaken.
Do you honestly believe we have been unfair?
I think not.

Just keep playing the victim, but it's not reality;
We've divulged in all the abuse we'll be taking.
When you're in need of us do you think we'll care?
I think not.
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Date Submitted: Nov 07, 2009 (12:41 PM)
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  PoeticallyDefi...
11/08/09 (08:40 PM) 
very powerful...short yet intense...loved it

  Athena317
11/08/09 (08:00 PM) 
last 2 lines nailed the sentiment of the emotions behind this write!

  leethal
11/08/09 (04:31 PM) 
i agree with kiss. the repetition of "i think not" was a nice touch. sometimes repetition can be dangerous, but u pulled it off in this joint

  Sunkissed25
11/08/09 (02:23 PM) 
oooh this was dope! I love the repetition..it really drove the point across and brought it home at the end. People tend to burn useful bridges all the time actin a ass to others. Good write!

  Indispensable&...
11/08/09 (09:03 AM) 
Straight to the point... Some never really "SEE" what we do for them... to appriciate it learn from it and grow from it... Much Luv Indispensable♥Soul

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