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"Mr. Morales"
  by D1Uadore305


Called Mr. Morales today
Something was up
I knew he wasn't okay
When I felt his pain

Through the reciever
I could feel his rain
about to drain from his soul
through his eyes

His voice was even shaking
And when I mentioned my uncle funeral
His voice showed...
that caused even more pain

He told me to call him back
but I didn't want to hang up
"Baby stay on the line,
No need for words- I'll shut up"

After some time
I felt an internal cry from my reciever
Time to hang up and give him space.
Secretly hoping to be with him in this case

As I was about to hang up
I realized I was on the verge of tears
Hearing him so hurt
Shit... that was my biggest fear

I guess the saying is true when you in love with someone;
When you cry,
I cry,
We cry,
Together.
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Date Submitted: Feb 04, 2009 (08:30 PM)
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  J-Image
11/03/09 (01:55 PM) 
Ur gud at paintin a picture with, I was drawn to this poem. (Applause)

  spud124
10/29/09 (04:49 AM) 
damn it man

  TUANE
07/22/09 (01:43 AM) 
Another nice write ma. You painted an image and made me feel like I was htere. There on tha fne ma. "When you cry, I cry, We cry togetha" When you have that love, this is so tru. You can feel tha feeling that you mate isnt even showing. Loving this ma. 10starz

  J3LLYB3AN
03/14/09 (09:55 PM) 
this was a coo scribe felt the emotions and all definitely keep it up hunn

  Sentinal
02/23/09 (06:12 PM) 
Damn... I'm really feeling this one. You're ending was completely the truth. Nice write ma

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