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"Ms Ness - iScribe (w/ Audio)"
  by Ms Ness
  - This Poem is a response to the poem S.L.P ~i ScRiBe~ by S.L.P.


Shh... if you listen closely
Y'all might as well hear
The heavy hitting Timberland footsteps signifying the return
I said THE RETURN of a poetic veteran.

..."G-G Gettum Girl"
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"Ms Ness"
Who am I?
I am a poetist, and iScribe
I write lines and uhm I rhyme
And within it, I find
New meaning, new life
A new flow, a new vice
A new strength to be seen
For I'm another menace to society

iScribe
Written plays of Poetic Mind Games
With an immense amount of foreplay
My words? Shit... its a lot of fucking with emotions
My words? Shit... its a lot of testing with devotions
And with the way I sway and diversify my scribing pace
"Response" babies were made
And other poetic wives took my place

But WAIT... theres more...

Along with that?
iScribe some contortions of verbs, adjectives and nouns
Irreplaceable connotations of a metaphysical realm
To then conjure up Metaphorical curiosity
Swallow some scrolls
And diminish petty misconstrued assumptions
On why I constantly made y'all "Punch the Wall"
And why I forced you to a trilogy hitter of a "Cerebral Annihilation"
To succumb you, the reader to feel my deprivation? Who knows...

When iScribe
I'm SuMthiN like an imperfect beauTy
Bklyn.bred, Softly Spoken yet known as the "Forgotten1"
A DARK KNIGHT, ProHood... but with a LuvLy, BLAKK ROSE
tattoo'd on my sides
Filled with Complex Confessions
The Truf filled with some aggression

I treat my pen like a dick and make sure you get the deepest penetration
Give you all the pain necessary
But in the end you STILL haven't learned a lesson
Only gained more desire for me to feed you more of what I got

iScribe, iRhyme
...until my mother fuckin heart beats stop!
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Date Submitted: Dec 10, 2007 (11:56 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 04/30/08 (11:42 AM)
Author: Davy
Poem Title: iScribe (interpreted...

Date: 12/27/07 (05:17 AM)
Author: Insatiable.vessel
Poem Title: IV...-i Scribe-

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comment icon  COMMENTS (31)
  JUST ME!
06/04/08 (09:22 AM) 
OK OK I SEE WHAT YOU DOING. I LIKE THE WAY THIS IS AN INTRODUCTION OF AND YOUR SKILL! GOD JOB. WILL BE BAC TO LISTEN AND READ MORE OF YOUR STUFF

  a bonita vonit...
05/01/08 (03:02 PM) 
lol u are so cute!!! killinem with FAT WORDS wih ur lil girl voice xox last stanza was ill dam gurly keep flowin cause u spi NAYTHEN BUT THE TRUTH.

  Davy
04/30/08 (11:00 AM) 
OOOooooo...."Written plays of Poetic Mind Games With an immense amount of foreplay" What!? Who says that....apprently the one who scribes until her heartbeat dies.10* like biam!

  DEATH
02/15/08 (08:27 AM) 
ok ok, this one of the joint where, if you were in a poetry club, the world would stop and listen, then you'd feel a earthquake under your feet from everybody on the planet clappin, good job ma, DEATHhasSPOKEN!

  Syndel
02/06/08 (08:47 PM) 
ohhh Ms Ness you can speak for me anytime my name is kathy Iam one of the women in the house Nadine is at this shit is dope as hell I love your voice like dont even try to fuc with me nadine say i curse too much but damn you tore this shit up thanks

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