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"Must be real love"
  by Poetic Aquarian


A promise shouldn't be made if it's not intent on being kept
I wept on missed chances but you slept on my kindness
I wanted so badly to call you my highness
But I suffered from a severe affliction that comes with being in love called blindness
You said we would try this but here I remain on the waiting list
Most would call you just an ordinary fish
But obviously you worked your magic on me
So I want to work my magic quick but you keep disappearing
I mean how much more proof do you need than people cheering us on
I can't stand the fact that this shit keeps going on
But for some odd reason I keep coming back until you and I isn't just a fantasy
It's a fact
I guess that odd reason is love because I'm in love with you
I can't make it no plainer
Cause if it wasn't love then you've felt my anger
And would've been nothing more to me than a stranger on the street
I guess I can't compete with them other niggas
But truth be told them other niggas can't compete with me
Yeah I might not be stocky
May not fight like Rocky
Or even call my women B's
But that leaves what?
Everything else
You killing me and yet I'd die in your arms
Maybe I'm wrong for loving you
But my heart only wants, no, my heart only needs you
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Date Submitted: Oct 28, 2007 (12:46 AM)
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  leslies carmel...
11/29/07 (03:34 PM) 
i kno how u feelin boo boo but its all good

  lilmama6162000
11/07/07 (09:53 AM) 
IS DAT RIGHT LOL BUT I FEEL WHERE U CUMIN FROM I HAD DIS FEELIN BE4

  Cacia
11/06/07 (12:28 PM) 
if only she knew... this is a really nice piece! good write 10 stars

  mrs.johnson
11/05/07 (11:28 AM) 
awww. i feel it. we've all been through it.

  ghetto
11/03/07 (12:36 PM) 
i know how u feel on da last line my heart needed someone but all he did was hurt me..so i guess i was blind to see that he never really loved me..i think al he loved was wat i had not not for who i was. But this is it..this is..well u know wat it is cuz you wrote it...no point for me to tell you wat it is..

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