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"My 18th Birthday"
  by Underground King


I woke up early in the morning, my vision's slightly faded
In my mind I'm feeling jaded, but feeling good cuz I made it
18 years in total, reminiscing through my photos
from past events in my life, and most of them were solo
Keep to myself a lot, stayed away from all the nonsence
I always had a born alone die alone concept
My conscience, guided me the last couple years
A couple people died but couldn't shed a couple tears
Conquered all my fears, now i'm a new man
left my past behind and got a new plan
I found poetry last year, It flows through my vains
I write what's real, so you can read through my pain
Born in NYC, just the rotten apple's son
I just pray that one day I reach the age of 21
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Date Submitted: Jan 29, 2008 (10:04 PM)
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  Pip
05/23/08 (09:57 PM) 
your 18th b-day is such an important milestone i'm so glad your chose to write a poem about it. very well done. I look forward to readin the 1 for your 21st cause you'll make it!!

  Michae-Angele
03/23/08 (07:05 PM) 
nice flow..."I just pray that one day I reach the age of 21"...nice conclusion, ten stars

  1m m3
02/24/08 (06:22 PM) 
good write i like how it flows.. just keep ya head up an you will make it through anything and past what you think you won't

  *Miss Toya*
01/29/08 (10:39 PM) 
very nice..."I found poetry last year, It flows through my vains I write what's real, so you can read through my pain" i like that in you...this poem has a very nice feel to it....ten starz!

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