He was different indeed
In his presence is where I longed to be
After meeting him
My daydreams were replaced with
The fact that I believed
He was placed here on earth
Just for my reprieve
Hoping it was not just temporary
He taught me the meaning of intimacy
Not through touch but mentally
In his eyes I could see my life clearly
Before him I was living blindly
We would talk for hours
About everything and nothing
His voice was my drug
The sound of it so calming
Everthing I ever wanted was within reach
Or so it seemed
Until I realized he was here to teach me
As a woman how I should be treated
Didn't he know that from first glance
His love was all I needed
Unfortunately that was not my angels intent
He only came to represent
What love could be in every angle
As I watched his ascent back to his place in heaven
I knew no one would ever replace my angel
You know, I gotta say that this reminds me of something similar to Jill Scott. There's so much truth and emotion in this poem that it can't help but to hit you at the heart.
You took this write on soo many different levels, physically, mentally and spiritually, all three states of being fit very well into your over desription and the beauty of this write, left me with such a peaceful feeling...very well done!
OMG, this was so beautiful and truly where my heart spoke from when I wrote my piece. Sometimes that mental intimacy shared is the greatest gift of all.