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"My Apology to you.."
  by Poetic Obsessions


I feel bad cause I turned you down

which made you sad and your face frown.

Things are at a struggle for me now

but I wish I could be with you like

romeo and juleit till thee end

but for now we just have to stay as friends.

Single life is the best for me now cause I can

consentrate on achieven my goals .

But keep hope alive cause our love will

blossom like a wild fire thur a forrest but don't

forget about me cause I haven't forgotten about you....

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Date Submitted: Sep 21, 2007 (04:08 PM)
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  tweety14
01/15/09 (07:21 PM) 
this is strong. you had to choose between your dreams and love. you choose what is best for you. i like the way it flows and the way its easy to understand the point its not a poem that you have to scratch your head to understand you got talent so keep writing and keep your head in your future

  dontnohow
01/15/09 (09:39 AM) 
thats what im talkin about...lol... 10+ and a fav...

  L.edwards
02/28/08 (08:07 PM) 
aww that was so sweet and beatiful so thoughtful it had good flow i enjoyed it

  sexy shonnie
01/17/08 (06:06 PM) 
i love it u got your point across

  simplyG
12/03/07 (09:47 PM) 
nice and to the point!

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